Comments on: chapter 6 page 172

By: Chaotic

Chaotic — Thu, 30 Oct 2025 23:46:53 +0000

Oh this is a good payoff/twist. And I’m SO GLAD no one died.

By: tinwatchman

tinwatchman — Wed, 20 Aug 2025 10:56:53 +0000

In reply to Sirksome. That big evil grin she had certainly seemed to hold way more pain than pleasure in that moment.

By: tinwatchman

tinwatchman — Tue, 19 Aug 2025 07:16:17 +0000

Ha! It’s gonna really suck if she dies of blood loss in the car.

By: tinwatchman

tinwatchman — Tue, 19 Aug 2025 04:27:01 +0000

In reply to Fellow. And then it'll turn out she actually heard the message because someone else stole her silverware and they didn't care about the answering machine tapes!

By: UnboundMotion

UnboundMotion — Mon, 04 Aug 2025 14:19:49 +0000

In reply to loota-crocruta. Defenestration is such a fun word

By: Fellow

Fellow — Tue, 22 Jul 2025 00:06:18 +0000

In reply to khade. Alternate prediction: We'll get an offhand comment from mustard that her silverware is missing, showing that mcbell made good on her promise to rob her.

By: khade

khade — Mon, 21 Jul 2025 06:37:08 +0000

In reply to Mr. A. It ran out of space a LONG time ago. Clearly. Or, my earlier suggestion of it being a long incoherent sobby mess. It's all there, but no one who isn't a currently sad drunk is going to get anything out of it.

By: Mr. A

Mr. A — Mon, 21 Jul 2025 03:51:00 +0000

New theory: Mustard still won't get to hear McBell's answering machine message, because the answering machine itself will break or catch fire or something.

By: Pylgrim

Pylgrim — Sun, 20 Jul 2025 11:40:24 +0000

In reply to Ash. Not to mention she was clinically dead at some point? It may just be that not everything returned.

By: Mr. A

Mr. A — Sat, 19 Jul 2025 16:03:17 +0000

In reply to Random Interloper. "Yes, I'm great at field medicine. That doesn't change the fact that you should have gone TO A HOSPITAL!"