Alt text: “I really wanted the chapter to be an even 200 pages but alas there’s one more”
Finally, a final page to let us know what Echo did to her cab driver. Did she ask to be let off a block away so as to not give away the base’s location? Have an awkward conversation about what a bear the makeup is to put on? Did she tip? Or just strangled them and dumped the cab somewhere out of the way? Did she recruit them to the Shadow Circus? The possibilities are endless!
Well, on the bright side, at least you’ve managed to pass the 200 page limit for this chapter, so, good job on reaching to the top, Joe!
The Mayor better not do anything to Dean Squeaky.
C’mon McBell, if there was ever a moment to put your understanding of narrative causality to work, it’s now.
You could end the chapter at 200, then have a 1 page chapter for the next page perhaps?
Alt text: “I really wanted the chapter to be an even 200 pages but alas there’s one more”
Finally, a final page to let us know what Echo did to her cab driver. Did she ask to be let off a block away so as to not give away the base’s location? Have an awkward conversation about what a bear the makeup is to put on? Did she tip? Or just strangled them and dumped the cab somewhere out of the way? Did she recruit them to the Shadow Circus? The possibilities are endless!
Got released just in time. so much for “4 hard years of clown school”